This week I am going to be showing you a piece of my writing .

cavities.

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Let me tell you about cavities. Cavities are caused by a whole lot of microbes in your mouth that loves candy it can leave a whole in you teeth also leaves a really bad stain in your teeth if you don’t brush your teeth. It all starts when you were a little baby when you mum or dad kisses you and that's when you get cavities. Also if lactic acid goes in you teeth it can go on to your second layer on your teeth and make it harder to grow.