I was a pupil at Hay Park School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
did you do this in toolkits day because I can't see any words on your post and what were you doing were you doing a PMI also add some words.
Kia orana Genete,I really like how you have reflected on your learning from the HPS Toolkits yesterday. One thing you could do to improve your post is add some information about the toolkits day because it will tell your reader what your PMI is about.From Miss Fortes
ok kanishka thankyou for the feed back
did you do this in toolkits day because I can't see any words on your post and what were you doing were you doing a PMI also add some words.
ReplyDeleteKia orana Genete,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have reflected on your learning from the HPS Toolkits yesterday. One thing you could do to improve your post is add some information about the toolkits day because it will tell your reader what your PMI is about.
From Miss Fortes
ok kanishka thankyou for the feed back
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