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Today I have been learning about energy.

One thing I found tricky was that i didn't understand some of the words.

It would be great if you could comment on my post and give me some feedback to make my learning better.

by Genete

Hello,I have been learning how to do an OREO paragraph.  OREO stands for opinion, reason, example, and restating your opinion.  Restate means to say it again.  I wrote this paragraph to persuade the reader to agree with my idea.please set down and relax and read my paragraph about dolphins.

  

The amazing paragraph about dolphins

The most phenomenal creation in the world is dolphins. because dolphins are very nice to people.Dolphins are a widely distributed and diverse group of fully aquatic marine mammals.the example is that when a predator comes the dolphins attacks.but sometimes the dolphins The most phenomenal creation in the world is dolphins.